Heart Beat

[dwim]

Ok Fenix, Miral told me over the AIM who they are. Sounds interesting I'd definitely check them out and their song Fiction too.
Life was really busy lately so I'm losing some of the hipster flavor ya know?
Thanks for bringing their name to my ignorant life. Again, I'd be sure to check that song out.

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I try to be humble but this guy threw my greatness in my face! I'm trying to deny my greatness!

"Everything belongs to me because I am poor." - Jack Kerouac Visions of Cody

[Fénix]

Glad to be of help. Orgy is a techno/industrial rock band(or something like that). Fiction (Dreams in Digital) is the full name.

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"Of course Oz will be happily nude. Everyone knows of my...admiration for nudity." ~ Oz

PROUD SLAVEBOY OF JELYMO

Enter Daredevil at Hero Realm

[dwim]

Your heart beats like acoustic
I can feel it in my hands
& see the vibration waves.
I feel it in my hands.
I feel it in my eyes.

The moon hangs like a pearly white
ornaments of false trees to come
in this night of endless words
of those whose voice I can only
imagine staying awake to
with the beating of digital hearts
but your heart beats acoustic
out of tune.

For now, we're the only two souls
connecting from miles apart
we stayed like that through the
morning and the noon
came in blasting through the door
with a written threat that
we may never connect like this again.

Your heart beats acoustic
My heart beats digital
Together,
our heart beats electric

roaring over the cheering crowds
of overflowing stadiums
where I watch the sounds move
I feel it in my hands
vibrating
sensation dancing
& moving
like fluidic
ripples in a pool.

I feel it like my hands
are on the speakers of the world.

Together,
our hearts beats electric.

[Fénix]

This one is different...I likes. I don't know why that Orgy song Fiction comes to mind when I read this poem.

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"Of course Oz will be happily nude. Everyone knows of my...admiration for nudity." ~ Oz

PROUD SLAVEBOY OF JELYMO

Enter Daredevil at Hero Realm

[dwim]

Orgy song? Fiction? Who's Orgy?

[Oz]

Oh my god, this was good. For me, no traces of Orgy, but still I loved it! Keep up the good work!

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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."

Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, 5Cats, Fenix and others.

I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

"Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano

[Fénix]

Not Orgy, just that song really. Don't ask me why...

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"Of course Oz will be happily nude. Everyone knows of my...admiration for nudity." ~ Oz

PROUD SLAVEBOY OF JELYMO

Enter Daredevil at Hero Realm

[*Leo the Lioness*]

well, i know who Orgy is, but i've only heard their cover of "Blue Monday".......*G

this poem makes me wonder more about the author

very well-written....

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"they've been going in and out of style....but they're guaranteed to raise a smile"

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[tyledras]

damn, i thought i'd responded to this one already! guess not
it made me smile. both times i read it.
i like the images and the way it flows...


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proud to call Ski my sidekick
namesake of a rascally tabby, courtesy of Eden, my twice-hero
Katchoo's my hero too

[jones]

Okay, it's probably just my disgusting mind but "pearly white" at the beginning of the second stanza makes me think of sperm. Is that intentional?

Don't get me wrong. This is an incredible poem. Wish I'd written it myself. I guess I've just got sperm on the brain.

take care

---jones

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